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Ryuu-Sensei and the Princess

Posted by DragonPunch - August 21st, 2009


Okay, I know the title might seem a little guy at first but let me explain.

It's the story of an alternate universe Japan set in a past/future kind of Japan. The Ruler's daughter has run away from home and is now lost. The story behind this is revealed in my novel. Anyway, so this young samurai named Ryuu Kibamaru happens to find the daughter of the emperor (they're about the same age) named Sakura Yamamido Genryukoji (long name yes, but it's her full family name). Sakura asks him to take her home to Edo (where she lives). Anyway, the emperor finds out her location thanks to the Shinsengumi, and now Ryuu and friends, Kowabachi, and Sasuke are being hunted down by the Shinsengumi. There is romance involved, and yes there will be several plot twists. Now, I need criticism before I start working on it. Tell me if this is a good plot or not and why.

THANKS!!!


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AHA! Someone has done his homework here!