DragonPunch's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Happy Birthday 10JD]

What muscular image, 10JD

You seem like a fat twit to me...

Anyways, This is actually pretty good. Never expected this coming from you, of all people...Good job!

[Friends till death]

*Facepalm*

Okay...I'm going to be straight with you. It's terrible. I honestly don't like any of it, but I'll give you a 3 for effort. For one, the premise is dull and lacks edge these days. You need to come up with a more original idea. For two, the style is a helluva lot simpler than your Kirby picture, which I honestly like a hell of a lot more. You only have a character, and the word "friend". I understand the ideas you are trying to convey, but it honestly feels like a complete fall to the face. I just...Don't know what to say for this one. You seriously need to think of something a little bit more detailed, and a lot less simple. Also, just the concept alone needs a major facelift. I don't know...I just can't bring myself to like this piece...

Anyways, good luck next time, and I look forward to your next piece.

[Kirby]

Got its problems...

But it's Kirby...How can you NOT like Kirby? Anyways, the Warp Star and Kirby look fine, but the water looks plain and looks like it's at an awkward angle. If you add a bit more detail to the water and put it at a 180 degree, it would like, but it just looks boring. As for the sky, it needs a few more stars, and it could definitely use some work. Also, the light source is completely wrong, and the moon needs to be shifted to the left to make it correct. However, don't feel obligated to put the moon in the empty space just because there's nothing there. Maybe you could add a mountain or something instead of screwing yourself over by placing the moon in the wrong place. The clouds need some work, too. This IS Dreamland after all, so make them fluffier and friendlier looking. Though it is nighttime, there's no excuse not to have fluffy clouds, especially in a place like Dreamland, where it looks child-like and friendly.

Sorry for the long critique, and I hope all of the ADVICE I have given you will help. Just fix the few things I pointed out and this picture would be a masterpiece! I look forward to seeing more from you! You show potential, but you've gotta harness it and use it! Good luck and I wish you the best of it!

[Maria]

Terrible...

Just terrible...It is just DOWNRIGHT horrendous...If I saw her walking down the street, I would run and hide because she's so ugly. Her face looks awkward, her neck is missing (wow...how could you MISS that), and it's just so messy...Why do you even bother drawing? Why bother trolling? Does it make your e-peen larger than your 2 inches already is? Does the trolly need some e-peen? I think he does. Well, too bad, you ain't gettin' any. You've had one little victory and that's all you're getting.

IloveNantes responds:

The neck is there, you're apparently just too dense to see that it's covered by the ruffles. I know that the face is slightly awkward--one of her eyes is set too high. I noticed. Thanks for the review, but since it's coming from someone that mainly draws anatomically squashed-up anime chicks, it's invalidated.

[Girlchan Contest Entry #2 B]

Stupidly Funny

This is just downright stupid, but it makes me laugh so much, you get a 10!

[Alt Concept: Chun-li]

Wow

She looks like a teacher!
I would certainly love to be in HER classroom! *insert Tucker noise from RvB here*

[The REAL Manana!!]

Hilariously Bad

In a good way...It's actually a very funny piece, and the humor isn't immature in the least bit, either, which I would certainly like to see from this site more often, rather than drawing penises for a good lol. Plus, who would've thought of a buff banana?

[White Hood Girl]

Wow...

I actually kind of like this one. But seeing as how you're a troll, I'm going to give you a 7 just because I feel generous today. If you kept drawing like this, I might actually learn to respect you a little more.

<deleted> responds:

I'm not a troll. You're a troll. You're trying to make me mad. Well it ain't working, buster!

[Justin Wong]

Yes, He Won

You fat twit. Nice picture, by the way. I really look forward to seeing your next masterpiece.

<deleted> responds:

Thanks

[The guyvers]

Pretty Impressive!

The first person below doesn't even know that Guyver is NOTHING like Power Rangers. Liking anime does not make you a weeaboo, and
quite frankly, I like this piece. It might not be a perfect, but I love how you varied the suits, but let's be honest; the black and yellow one looks
the most impressive. I would've given it a ten had the yellow and black Guyver suit had been in the front. I've never seen the Guyver anime
myself, but I DO know it's one of the great classics, especially now since Funimation has put it up on Youtube. Looks like I have something
new to watch now. 9/10