DragonPunch's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Eva]

Unfortunately not that great.

I'm sorry for being honest. Let me just get that clear, before you flame me for making a review. I really don't find anything really great about this piece. It's good, not great, which can be disappointing, and it is. You definitely have potential, and please, oh please, I beg of you DO NOT WASTE YOUR TALENT ON COCK JOKES! Everyone else does them, and it's really annoying. Anyway, never mind that moot point, the shading and lighting could definitely use some improvement (I'm hardly better myself, but hey), and I would like it if you added more clarity to the rain to make it pop with the picture better. Just some tips. I really hope you take my advice and not act like an immature butt hurt little girl. Can you do me just that one teensy little favor? Because, I'm tired of everyone flaming me for being honest.

SirCannabisClock responds:

lol I ain't mad bro, there's too many fags that can't take constructive criticism.

However I'd like to add you need to write your reviews with a little more clarity. Shading and lighting is all I retained from the jargon, and even so I thought "exactly what areas did you feel were off?"

[The stress of her regard]

KILL F***ING BILL!

She looks like she's ready to make some heads roll!

BizarroJoe responds:

... This is what I call unexpected.

[Late Halloween Special?]

CUTE!

U need to do more of these! I love the colors, and she is just so cute! ^_^

Cheang responds:

Thank you Hiryu! <4
I'll make sure to do more. I'm happy that your like it.^^ there's more on the way

[Balloon boy]

Ummm...WAY too simple

There a thousand things that could have been done to warrant this pic at least a 5, but this is just soooo bad. I can understand if this was used for a flash movie, but it's too simple for still life. Seriously, I could do this in not more than 10 minutes...It looks like you just rushed it, and didn't bother to be creative at all. This is a bad way to start as an artist, and this road leads nowhere but to ruin.

quitestupid responds:

ooooooooohhhhhhh, got me!

[CH02 - BAMF]

Looks relatively well done!

It looks great, but not excellent. The style here is like nothing I have seen, but unfortunately, the style to me just doesn't look "excellent". Props for style, though!

Arcaniel responds:

Thanks for review! :D

[Spazkid VS The World]

Umm...interesting...

I like the premise, and it would have been a 10 if not for the dick that is just blatantly on the picture. I like it, but seriously, get rid of the penis...it's kinda gross...

Sheller responds:

that isn't what Cory would want

[Awestehn]

Awestehn, Suck it

It's a great style, I'll give you that, Skeller. However, it needs color. Oh, and Awestehn, shut up, you whiny baby. He made fan art of you, so take it as a compliment. Sheesh...you think someone would appreciate having fan art made of them.

Sheller responds:

that last sentence is so rife with hyporcrisy oh man I am laughing