DragonPunch's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Eva]

Unfortunately not that great.

I'm sorry for being honest. Let me just get that clear, before you flame me for making a review. I really don't find anything really great about this piece. It's good, not great, which can be disappointing, and it is. You definitely have potential, and please, oh please, I beg of you DO NOT WASTE YOUR TALENT ON COCK JOKES! Everyone else does them, and it's really annoying. Anyway, never mind that moot point, the shading and lighting could definitely use some improvement (I'm hardly better myself, but hey), and I would like it if you added more clarity to the rain to make it pop with the picture better. Just some tips. I really hope you take my advice and not act like an immature butt hurt little girl. Can you do me just that one teensy little favor? Because, I'm tired of everyone flaming me for being honest.

SirCannabisClock responds:

lol I ain't mad bro, there's too many fags that can't take constructive criticism.

However I'd like to add you need to write your reviews with a little more clarity. Shading and lighting is all I retained from the jargon, and even so I thought "exactly what areas did you feel were off?"

[Julie-Su: 25YL [updated]]

Being a little nicer...but

It's a sonic character drawn like a pornstar...Look, I get it; you're horny for Amy. We GET IT! Just, don't draw something like this EVER AGAIN because:
A) It's disturbing
B) Sonic and friends have been drawn this way for years, and it's getting real old real quick
C) Lack of originality
D) Stop with the redrawings of Sonic characters. We don't need any more of them. Seriously, try not to draw Sonic characters in this way.

Psychopath responds:

Amy? This is Julie-Su from the Archie comic books.

[The stress of her regard]

KILL F***ING BILL!

She looks like she's ready to make some heads roll!

BizarroJoe responds:

... This is what I call unexpected.

[Late Halloween Special?]

CUTE!

U need to do more of these! I love the colors, and she is just so cute! ^_^

Cheang responds:

Thank you Hiryu! <4
I'll make sure to do more. I'm happy that your like it.^^ there's more on the way

[Satan's Skull]

Totally Sucks

Let's start with the most obvious feature...this was done on poor quality paper, lacks detail, lacks coloring, lacks shadowing, lacks basically anything to call this even "good"...Looks more like mediocre to me. Let's also pick on the fact that it lacks any kind of technique whatsoever. Oh, and the whole "it was 5 in the morning gimme a break" cop out won't work on me. But, YOU CAN take criticism, right? Ha, how about a big fat "NO!" Now, who's being the hypocrite here? I can tell you right off the bat, you're going to act like a big giant pussy; and even though I did scout you, I only did that so you could get reviewed by others, who might honestly feel the same way about this garbage that I did. When you get criticism, you either say, "Thank you" or "Thanks for the tip" or if there's a hater on your work for no reason, just shrug it off and not say anything. Don't come up with excuses, don't say anything that even REMOTELY COMES OFF AS AN EXCUSE. Seriously, grow up if you want to make good art.

-The proper response should have been, "Though it was early in the morning, I could have done a better job on the coloring. Thanks for pointing that out, isco919."

Jigsaw80puppet responds:

lol u mad?

[Balloon boy]

Ummm...WAY too simple

There a thousand things that could have been done to warrant this pic at least a 5, but this is just soooo bad. I can understand if this was used for a flash movie, but it's too simple for still life. Seriously, I could do this in not more than 10 minutes...It looks like you just rushed it, and didn't bother to be creative at all. This is a bad way to start as an artist, and this road leads nowhere but to ruin.

quitestupid responds:

ooooooooohhhhhhh, got me!

[CH02 - BAMF]

Looks relatively well done!

It looks great, but not excellent. The style here is like nothing I have seen, but unfortunately, the style to me just doesn't look "excellent". Props for style, though!

Arcaniel responds:

Thanks for review! :D

[HiryuGouki is Successful!!!]

You did it wrong...

I look a lot sexier than that! This is completely wrong! It's funny, though, so I gotta give you SOME credit, LOL.

10JD responds:

Your ACTUAL Responce: (He Seriously PM'd me this)
"That does not look like me at all! It's pretty funny though. Let's see, I have a sexy youthful face, that women adore, I have six packs coming in, My muscles are getting bigger, etc...I guess you could say I have a lean frame, but you know...I've got enough muscle to kick some ass with. I also have short, but very sexy brown hair, and brown eyes that ladies tell me "I'm afraid of staring into your eyes too long, lest I get sucked into their eternal beauty." No, seriously, they tell me that all the time."

[Spazkid VS The World]

Umm...interesting...

I like the premise, and it would have been a 10 if not for the dick that is just blatantly on the picture. I like it, but seriously, get rid of the penis...it's kinda gross...

Sheller responds:

that isn't what Cory would want

[Awestehn]

Awestehn, Suck it

It's a great style, I'll give you that, Skeller. However, it needs color. Oh, and Awestehn, shut up, you whiny baby. He made fan art of you, so take it as a compliment. Sheesh...you think someone would appreciate having fan art made of them.

Sheller responds:

that last sentence is so rife with hyporcrisy oh man I am laughing