Fixed it! Lemme know what you think!

Well, here's a piece I had been working on for the last couple days, constantly analyzing and correcting it, and still am, by the way. This is actually a prize for someone catching my Kiriban on DeviantART the other day, so I am trying to take my time and make this the best piece I have ever done. And yes, I am photoshopping this one. Any suggestions on tutorials for better shading techniques? That would really help a lot.

Just when I thought this community couldn't stoop any lower. You all are now accusing me of tracing. It's like Limbo in this community. "How low can you go?" "How low can you go?" I'll tell ya how low. Accusing someone of tracing when they CLEARLY DO NOT. Retards.

Three different sketches of the same character. The character in question is Jillian. I want you to vote on the three designs and tell me which one is the best out of three. I will tally up the votes, and when the totals are counted, that's how I will draw Jillian from now on. I am doing this for ALL of my characters. The designs will all be my own, and yes I will have YOU vote on them. I want to do this because even before I start working on Calamity, I want user feedback during every step of the process. That way, I know what to put into the game's designs. Think of this as a sort of "collaboration" if you will. Yes, I will have Jillian in a basic standing pose, but only for reference. From then on, when the votes are tallied, I will draw Jillian's action portrait and other concept work.

TL;DR I will be drawing three different designs of the same character, and I want you to vote on which one is the best out of the three.

For quite a while. Instead, HiryuGoukiVer2 will be the account you can talk to me directly with. I will not be posting in the art forum using this account for quite a while either. HiryuGoukiVer2 will be doing that. If you have any advice to give, talk to the other account, not this one. Thank you!

P.S. TurkeyonaStick, I'm really sorry for giving you and your members a hard time. Just leave HiryuGoukiVer2 alone. Let me post in the art forum with that account. I will PROVE to you that I have changed.

This is something I whipped up in 15 minutes. I used my old sketch and fixed what I KNEW was wrong, and hopefully, I fixed all of the things people were complaining about. As for the changes:

- Better facial expression
- Rounder hips, more of a shapely body
- Thicker arms
- Better hair structure
- The feet are finally correct (I hope)
- The legs have more weight
- The breasts look better

Well, let me know if any changes need to be made. Thanks for taking me under your wing until I improve on my anatomy, Fifty-50. I will use your lessons wisely.
*bow*

Before I start Photoshopping this one, I need a bit of feedback so that I know what to correct. I have already finished the sketch, but I want you to take a look and tell me immediately what is wrong so I can fix it. Ready? Here it is:

Who the hell unscouted me? Unfairly and without reason at that!

For abuse and harassment? I swear...I hate this new site design. It's unusable! Bring back the FAQ so I can find the people to report a problem with NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!

Enjoy your account while you still have one.